This is for Danae's page. I love her. If you ever want to trade for a TM, let me know.
I've just gone through and fixed any punctuation that I noticed. Some things need to be reworked, so I just highlighted those parts.
Danae is our gentle giant. Her temperament is everything we could have hoped for when adding her to our program. She loves people, children and adults alike. Often winning even the most stubborn person over with her goofy personality and friendly nature.
Where children are concerned immediately going into a calm, softer nature to greet them. (This should be rewritten. Maybe ‘when children are around she adopts a calm, soft nature to greet them.* Or something. You can have calm and soft, or calmer and softer. It sounds weird to mix them. Also, there is no subject in that sentence. So, play with it a little until you come up with something you like.)Make no mistake though, this gentle giant can become the most fearless of protectors when she senses a threat. She doesn*t hesitate to put herself front and center to protect family and home.
Danae is a large female with an athletic body and great substance, allowing her to move with an effortless, flowing gait. She has a confident personality and enjoys having more than her fair share of attention. She has a self-assured, very direct stare, letting you know that she is always aware of what is going on around her. She is happy doing anything that is asked of her as long as it includes spending time with her family. Whether heading to the show ring, walking with her family, pulling her best friend Dannika in her sled, or just relaxing with us, she is always up for the task.
Danae is out of Micci de Italica Terrae and Dei Rivale Machavelli, taking the best traits from both of these dogs to make a wonderful dog that we are over-joyed to have as part of our breeding program.
Some highlights from her pedigree features some great corsi like Rivale Mojo, Dei Rivale Risa, Boss, Marneo, Dei Dauni Italia, and Conan. This sentence needs to be rewritten in some way. A list should be set off by a colon. You could say ‘some highlights from her pedigree include great corsi(is this capitalized? I*m not sure.) such as: dog, dog, other dog.”
